20 Dan Brown Doozies
The Telegraph takes Dan Brown to task. Here’s a list of 20 sentences that might do well in the annual Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest.
19. The Da Vinci Code, chapter 83: “The Knights Templar were warriors,” Teabing reminded, the sound of his aluminum crutches echoing in this reverberant space.
“Remind” is a transitive verb – you need to remind someone of something. You can’t just remind. And if the crutches echo, we know the space is reverberant.
via The Lost Symbol and The Da Vinci Code author Dan Brown’s 20 worst sentences - Telegraph.
